These principles are drawn from how the Post already writes — its flyers, its older pages, and its memorial content. They are a description of the Post's voice, not an invention.
Plain and direct
Say what a thing is, when it happens, and what it costs. The Post’s own flyers do this well: "First ball drops 7:30 PM", "$10 admission", "Doors open at 6".
Do Bingo runs Sunday at 2:00 p.m. and Wednesday at 7:30 p.m.
Don't Join us for an exciting evening of gaming entertainment!
Everyone is welcome
The Post repeats this constantly and it matters commercially — bingo, the Grill, dances and rentals are open to the public. Say so explicitly; people assume a Legion post is members-only.
Do Open to the public — no membership required.
Don't Members and their guests are invited.
Connect spending to purpose
Every flyer ends with a version of "supporting our veterans and community". Money spent here funds programmes, and saying so is the strongest reason to choose the Post over a commercial venue.
Do Rentals directly fund scholarships and veterans assistance.
Don't Competitive rates available.
Drop the volume for memorial content
Promotional copy can be loud. Anything touching service, sacrifice, POW/MIA, or the Post’s namesakes is written plainly and without exclamation marks. Compare the Missing Man Table page to a bingo flyer — that gap is deliberate.
Do Until the day they return home, or find eternal peace, we will remember.
Don't Check out our AMAZING memorial display!
Never overstate what we know
This site was rebuilt after years of stale information went unnoticed — including bingo nights that had stopped running. If a detail is not confirmed, leave it out rather than guess.
Do Call (770) 466-4728 to confirm holiday hours.
Don't Open every day, year round!